Friday, May 20, 2005 at 17:34
Oh, you mean like this ?
"By the way, this from me, who my children well remebmer how i used to get the yellow highlighter on the school newsletters and send them back to the teacher - now they should do better, so deserve to be corrected."
remember spelt incorrectly
"i" needs to be a capital letter
"to get the yellow highlighter onto"
change to "used to use the yellow highlighter on"
teacher...singular, they plural....please don't mix.
Suggest re phrasing the last part of the very one long sentence, possibly breaking it into two more coherent sentences.
Footy...former teacher
(yep, we all make mistakes, don't we:))))))))
(and boy will I get some flak over this one)
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